Monday 12 August 2013

Mackenzie's Speech (Animal Cruelty)

Animal Abuse Speech


Last Year Kimmy the Dog was found wandering around Port Hills, Christchurch. Her mouth had been taped, She also had been hit so hard her eye had fallen out!!! She looked nothing but a skeleton with fur. A Vet describes her condition the WORST he had seen in Twenty Years!!!!!!!!

My Speech is on Animal Cruelty 

By Mackenzie

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  2. Mackenzie i like your little paragraph/introduction and your scenario and you painted a picture in my mind.;p
    from Natalya

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  3. Your opening para is great because it starts straight away and it really makes you think about animal cruelty.

    Izzy.

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