BRYCE'S OPENING PARAGRAPH
WHY YOU SHOULD HAVE A ANIMAL FOR AG DAY!
Clevedon school should all experience having to raise a animal for Ag day Why because they are really funny, comical and entertaining animals. I've had lambs over the past 7 years.My last few lambs were really funny because they would do stupid things like my last year's lamb would jump on top of its kennel and guard it from you but if you go too close she would bunt you.
Your opening paragraph is good because you have referred back to your past experiences and you have used an attentions grabbing first sentence. You have written an opinion with humor
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